We've been focusing on really interesting beginnings for our writing because if we have an interesting beginning, people will want to keep reading. Here are some of our beginnings:
When I did the cross country race I went over lots of obsticles.
- Lucas
When I was at the starting line I felt butterflies in my tummy! Cross country was amazing!!!
- Riley
As my legs shivered as the wind, cold wind, blew softly through the beautiful blue sky, tears came out because I was so so happy that the big day had arrived.
- Audrey
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